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找出下面这封辞职信在写作技巧上的不足之处,并将其加以改进。  Dear Mr.Wang:  As we discussed in your office yesterday,I have made the decisionto subruit my resignation,effective three weeks from now一0ctober 10.  The reasons,as I told you, are that I have had an offer to take a much bigger job at a substantially greater salary than I am earning at Houston Food. And the opportunity for advaneement cannot be matched in this company  I will continue,as in the past,to perform my dutles as budget director in a responsible manner,and I stand ready to do whatever I can to help my replacement  Sincerely,

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  此信的不足之处如下:

  1.第二段陈述辞职理由时用词过于直白,语气不够委婉,对目前的工作和公司有些许贬低(take a“much bigger job”;“a substantially greateasalary”;the opportunity…“cannot be matched in this company”)。

  2.信的结尾虽表达了在离职前继续做好工作并帮助接替的人,但语气不够热情,似乎只是公事公办。

  3,作者没有对上司和同事表示任何感谢。

  改进后的辞职信:

Dear Mr Wang:

  As we discussed in your office yesterday,I have decided to submit my resignation as budget director,effective two weeks from now Oetober 10

  I have enjoyed my working at the Houston Food very much.The fellow staff are so kind and cooperative.You created a perfect environment for me for learning and growing.And,of course,I would not feel competent to accept the new job if I had not had the rieh experience here I will always be grateful for your confidence in me.

  Reluctant though I am to leave the Houston.I am sure you understand my position.I felt that I simply could not turn down a position that appears to offer such promise The additional income is a faetor,of course,but a relatively minor one.What I am most excited about is the chance to assume broad accounting responsibilities that could lead to exciting new opportunities in financial management

  I am,of course,determined tO perform my duties in the best possible manner in the tWO weeks I have left If you can think of anything I can do to help my replacement take over the work of budget dimetor,I’II be glad to have your suggestions.

  Sincerely,

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选用前面的条件句型组合句子。1.The company/advertise/overseas       It/be/more competitive/last year2.Employees/live/more than 10 kmfrom offlee     They/receive/travel allowance3.We/choose/Site B      The building/finish/by April4.Managing Director/resign/now     The company/benefit/immediatdy5.The company/pay/less commission    Profits/be/higher/last year6.We/mreceive/architects’plan     The buildlng/complete/ next month7.Employees/mwork/more than ten hours overtime    They/get/an extra day’s holiday8.He/be/Managing Director      The company/collapse9.There/be/fewer management staff      More work/do10.We/not build/rest room      The employees/strike

现选择一合适的词或短语把下面A和B两部分连接起来。cause,be caused by,result from,result in,lead to          A                                          B1)Imprecise terms of reference               a)unsatisfactory report2)Low demand                                 b)expensive product3)The high level of leasing                  c)higher level of taxation4)Lack of interest in the new production plan d)low staff morale5)The Success of the report                    e)careful planning6)The unsuitable photocopy                     f)poor maintenance ofequipment service

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用所给的词、短语或句型将下列句子译成英语:1)你掌握的信息越全面准确,你就越可能作出正确的决策。(the...the...)2)今年世界的钢铁产量比去年高出百分之十五。(higherthan...)3)他对别人的关心远远胜过对自己的关心。(much more concerned about...than...)4)世界贸易组织与以前相比变得更为强大和有效了。(the World Trade Organization,more than...)5)在我们所接到的报盘中,你们的最没有竞争力因而也是最不能接受的。(offers,theleast...,the most...)6)他的工作表现比我们公司的其他雇员好得多。(perform much better than...)

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